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If I were ...
I was not a big fan of poetry , never liked and never tried ...
But I suddenly found myself writing this poem after hearing just one phrase from a movie ....
It's a good line [line] here refers to a good sentence from a movie ...
Any how ... hope you like my first poem .... ;-)
If I were a melody …
If I were a line ….
If I were a ray, that simply can shine.
If I were a story …
With hopes and glory …
With a name to remember that will always be mine.
But it’s just me …
A [Human] as you see …
A human that all his dream is just to be free.
Hey, where is the way?
Nobody here to say…
Nobody here even to listen how could it be? Or should be? Or may?
So, what can I do?
Asking one or two??!!
Believe me when I say: No one even thinks it could be true!
But still have the hopes …
A fool you may say …
But I don’t know why, I’m sure out there, there must be a way …
I’ll go and find it …
It’s not enough to pray …
I’ll find it for you and me to stay …
If I were a melody …
If I were a line …
If I could ever be … I’d never be mine …
If I could ever be … I’d live for the [We]
So, all I can hope for is your best … wish …… to ……… me …!
NooN
Comments
Fri, 03/16/2012 - 14:07
Hey Nader, you are cool! You can write a poem! I supposed poems are something I would never have enough talent to write. Though I don't have much fondness for poetry, I can sense that your poem has strong rhythm. Are you trying to express some feeling via your poem, I can sense that, but I don't know what exact feeling you are trying to tell us.
:-P I am really poor in poem appreciation. But I do enjoy raad Chinese poems, which were fascinating in both semantic meanings and contextual structure.
Anyhow, you are awesome!
Fri, 03/16/2012 - 23:11
Thanks Ally ... it was good to read your comment
May be I'll try to explain my poem, I don't feel that it's that hard, but may be I'm wrong ... anyhow, thanks again ;-)
Mon, 03/05/2012 - 22:35
If i were a pig,i want to add a reading schedule
If i were a pig,i can find a dream.we are playing life?Or our fate?
Fri, 02/17/2012 - 17:14
if i were a stone
i needs no thinking
when night comes
it would be peaceful for me
but how could a man without thought
it is paradox
we can be nothing unless we believe we r.
Fri, 02/10/2012 - 16:54
What's this, the lyric?